i just want to offer a small critique, honestly. Everything is pretty damn good except the relationship transitions need to be a bit more subtle for realistic effect. the more real it seems it could be, the better it actually is. for example the blonde girl, you portrayed her as modest and prudish, so keep that going. her relationship should be slow going and should just be dialogue for awhile. and just as important as that last point, there should be something that ties their relationship together like the brunette with writing reading. maybe she play recreational soccer and the mc is the coach. and she comes over for 1v1 practice... see where im going? and maybe the first time the mc and her kiss is after a practice session at the mc's house she stays over for a bit and they watch a movie. then the second time she stays after practice she tells you its her birthday and you have to give her b day spanking and her first kiss! she would be nervous but you would talk her into it because their relationship is on solid ground now. idk something like that.
sublte :) and thanks for what you already have going!
Interesting start have to see how this progresses hopefully will be another update soon though the son already hates the dad well he is about to hate him even more in my playthough.
This demo looks really good, I hope you are planning a release here after each update. I'm willing to support creators I just can't sign up for monthly payments on a "may not be completed basis" not saying that's your plan but to many fools have burned my monthly support out.
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I absolutely love it! Love the girls and love the whole plot.
And I can see a Justin Bieberesque look on the son which makes all the more fun!
i just want to offer a small critique, honestly. Everything is pretty damn good except the relationship transitions need to be a bit more subtle for realistic effect. the more real it seems it could be, the better it actually is. for example the blonde girl, you portrayed her as modest and prudish, so keep that going. her relationship should be slow going and should just be dialogue for awhile. and just as important as that last point, there should be something that ties their relationship together like the brunette with writing reading. maybe she play recreational soccer and the mc is the coach. and she comes over for 1v1 practice... see where im going? and maybe the first time the mc and her kiss is after a practice session at the mc's house she stays over for a bit and they watch a movie. then the second time she stays after practice she tells you its her birthday and you have to give her b day spanking and her first kiss! she would be nervous but you would talk her into it because their relationship is on solid ground now. idk something like that.
sublte :) and thanks for what you already have going!
Wonderful game. Need more :)
What are the tags for this game if anyone knows?
Link discord expired
will the game stay free till the end (with possible extras for patreons)? or demo means just a tryout?
the girls in the screenshots look pretty cute lol
Will we get the option to fuck the sons gf,ex and friend? Most likely going to try do all 3 in one playthrough if its possible
Interesting start have to see how this progresses hopefully will be another update soon though the son already hates the dad well he is about to hate him even more in my playthough.
This demo looks really good, I hope you are planning a release here after each update. I'm willing to support creators I just can't sign up for monthly payments on a "may not be completed basis" not saying that's your plan but to many fools have burned my monthly support out.
I will be releasing the rest on here on itch, no worries. I hope you enjoy!
So far, it's a great start. A few spelling/grammar issues, but no big deal. I'm looking forward to see this project continue .
Thats a great start. This isn't gonna be short is it? I love ur games but they always to short.